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Her awakeningHow long had she been lying there? Awake, but not fully awake. Able to move, but unable to comprehend how to move.Her awakening
She finally blinked; a miracle for what she had gone through.
…what had she gone through?
Her head turned left, surveying the land that way. It was black, like burnt ash, but then it was also bluish and a little green was mixed in way at the back. Her head turned right, but it was the same there.
Except for the firmly planted rock a little off of her head.
She looked straight up again; a black dot soared overhead. She didn’t know what it was; friend? Or
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He's such a cutie... well I'm not listening to snoring anymore... 
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- Current Residence: San Francisco... haha suckers
- Interests: Writing and naked people.
- Favourite band or musician: Uematsu Noubu! <3 Old, but awesome composer
- Favourite genre of music: Classical because it's hot
- Favourite artist: ZIL THE DUMBASS HIPPO
- Favourite poet or writer: Me...? *is slapped*
- Operating System: Windows. I don't talk with my hands
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- Wallpaper of choice: Marvy without shirt :D
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- Personal Quote: Sometimes the questions are complicated and the answers are simple.
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- Email: raye_peyba@hotmail.com
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I know your comment on one of the chapters in my story was from a long time ago, but I've managed to cool down and finally "suck it up".
Look, I'm sorry for getting all mad at you before. You didn't deserve it. You were only trying to help, and I can't believe it took me this long just to realize it after reading your comment and mine over again today, so I'm sorry.
I acted immature and stupid, but that's only because I was very immature at the time. I was ten when I first made that story. Life was good for me, and there weren't that many problems in the world for me. So to have received that kind of comment, especially when I came across that sentence "you are a terrible writer", I had completely lost it and threw it back in your face when you only meant to say that I merely needed to improve on my writing skills.
But now that I have come to realize that and fully accept it, I am trying my best to learn from it.
I'm well aware Link and Midna especially are slightly OOC. I'm still working on it.
And this may seem totally out of the blue, but I was wondering... do you think you could look over my newest chapters and tell me what you think and what I should improve on if there is anything to improve on? ^^
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"Why would I choose pure cosmic energy over Katara? How could it be a bad thing that I feel an attachment to her? Three chakras ago, that was a good thing!" -Aang
Take it, bitch!!! Hahaha! *prances*
Permenantly embedded hoof in your ass.
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Nintendo isn't a game, it's life.
It was criticism, and if she cannot take my comments I can assure you that she will be ripped open and eaten alive by others.
I'm not apologizing, I see no need to. If she decides to quit the series, then that's her problem. I think she could use the experience writing. She needs it, quite frankly.
I put extra sugar on it! Don't steal it!
Wait a minute... Sugar on popcorn!? You are utterly disgusting. Nobody puts sugar on popcorn!
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